2014년 9월 21일 일요일

Introduction

Everyday we absolutely use technology and we know it changed everything in every part of our life. We cannot live without technology in a society. Think about our daily lives. We naturally use it in work place, community, and in communication and socialization too. In other words, We heavily rely on technology. I insist that we will more dependent on it in the future, and human's job will be replaced by robots. You might say this is just a one of prediction about future and will not come true. However, today's many capitalist and economist are concerned about this, and reveal that unemployment rate of laborer and modern technology development are related. In order to not be replaced by technology, we need to aware of its negative effects and think of the way how we counteract against it. 

1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by describing how our lives connected to modern technology.

2. Explains the topic -
In the attention grabber I introduce the topic and the reason why I write this that we don't know why this idea is important to us.

3. My thesis -
My topic is that 'robots will take human's jobs in the future'. I think it is clear to describe the reasons for this.

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